Me and Stephanie have done some class research into our script, there was an issue within the script has we had two different scripts for the voice over we intend to have... we printed both out, and asked our class to pick the one they liked best. The overall majority chose voice over two, which is the longer one, however when being asked they suggested changes, such as cutting it down a bit, also change the first line a bit, so it didn't sound more like a fairytale. We weren't in such of a rush to find out straight away, as we could record the voice overs at home because no footage of my niece would be shown. We found from much research that me and Stephanie has done, it has proven that the audience like a lot cuts/fades to black as they don't know what to expect, and they get scared cause they believe they may jump.